After Effects Project (Video)

Alright, So I've been working and trying to figure out how to use the program "Adobe After Effects" for a little while now using spare time here and there....
After Effects is a professional program used for visual effects and editing. It is used within movie companies to do very, VERY nice effects which I am not able to do yet. :(

I slowly came up with this and I think it is alright. It's a little "intro video" which you can put in to whatever. What do you guys think?

(I know it is short, but it's kind of difficult to do!)

Soon I would be able to figure out how to do things like this....!